I think I’ve got it!

Okay, so maybe I’ve just got the idea, and the basic wording, but it’s a solid start. My thesis statement is “Removing racism from city institutions can inspire communities by being the change that many citizens are looking for. “

What do you think? Maybe it’s too simple, or I could use different wording, I can edit more later. I am just so relieved that I’ve done enough research that I feel I have enough information (and oodles of personal opinion) that I can actually start thinking about the outline with confidence. Whew! Thanks for the help Genglo! Smiley from millan.net

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